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saw
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Post by saw » February 7th, 2018, 9:55 am

variations of orange like this
can only be seen in the fire
but never stop trying to mix
the perfect shade of tangerine

the mind is a hungry child
determined to cry and scream
if its needs aren't met in the push and pull
of sentient vibrations

ah yes my friends, existential tug-o-war
try to focus on the knot in the line
dreams dashed and reborn,
each and every day is a jack-in-the-box

a goofy tune
with an occasional spring up the ass
oh c'mon. surely my language doesn't offend you
I suppose I could pretend if you like

so sorry my stoicism has gone flat
my apologies it isn't up to par,
by the way.............what is par
on this course ?


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If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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stilltrucking
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Re: par

Post by stilltrucking » February 7th, 2018, 9:01 pm

muchas gracias 8)




five days a week
eight hours a day
I set in shower booth with blue curtains
and listen to the children cry
Outside of a pediatrician's office I don't know where you can find more crying children than at a Walleyworld™

I listen to them and think to myself , you are damn right kid, you got a raw deal
go moan for mankind.

jack in the box
hippies look good in the box

nothing to do with your poem
I just got fixated on those hungry children :oops:

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the mingo
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Re: par

Post by the mingo » February 9th, 2018, 8:20 am

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Arcadia
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Re: par

Post by Arcadia » February 9th, 2018, 11:04 am

mostly a question... :lol: :lol: :lol:

always enjoying your poems, saw! gracias!!!!

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Re: par

Post by WIREMAN » February 12th, 2018, 8:26 am

Some course par is all u need 😎
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: par

Post by saw » February 12th, 2018, 9:28 am

thanx ladies and germs
always great to hear from you
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