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Post by the mingo » February 23rd, 2018, 7:51 pm

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Go ahead, strive for the crayon with shrill trigger fingers
I conclude you can shut the bees in
but can't keep them from being bees

displays of dialogue solve nothing
it's just a wild hobby and turns everyone
into french-fried people or snipers with insecurities
many think God gullible or likely to be astonished by our wit

what we think stinks

I hear the train
and there it goes
it appears we missed it
but we go on coloring
we color & color
faster & faster
hoping a mask, any mask, will hold
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 17

Post by saw » February 25th, 2018, 11:14 am

bravo...much to ponder here
creative descriptions pull you in

"when I was a boy of fourteen,
my father was so ignorant I could barely stand
to have the old man around.
But when I got to be twenty one,
I was astonished at much he had learned in seven years."

.................Mark Twain................
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: 17

Post by mnaz » February 25th, 2018, 5:53 pm

I'd rather have the dialogue than not have, but yeah.

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Re: 17

Post by the mingo » February 26th, 2018, 8:01 am

saw, I remember that Twain quote - it's a good one. * 8) *
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Re: 17

Post by creativesoul » February 26th, 2018, 9:31 am

Treehouses are on my mind- and a river rafting adventure
No talking in the canoe
I want to hear the water and the sound of water
I do not care about your childhood
Here in nature where all things matter
I want to listen and hear the truth
I want to remember the days of my youth
The sun will fall on my shoulders and hair
And all the beauty that ever existed there
I want to love the day as I loved as a child
With joy and laughter and fearless happiness
Trust and safety and precious timeless love
I will be a grandmother
I will read Mark Twain to my grandson
I will do whatever the universe asks of me
I gifted him a drum
The heartbeat
He will be born any minute
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I was 17 when I fell in love the first time
And a few times after that
But nothing can compare to this..
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by the mingo » February 26th, 2018, 9:51 am

I'd rather have the dialogue than not have,
I hear that, Mark, but we've had the dialogue, after every school shooting we get the "dialogue" - after the recent Florida shooting, the day after in fact,
I saw the headline "A Survivor's Story" and ... how many times I heard that? How many more times I got to hear it? I understand the positive use of the Second Amendment, I understand why it was written in the first place and I understand its place in the Bill of Rights. I understand its intent. What I don't understand is students gunned down by weapons of war in the name of the 2nd Amendment. There is no way in any hell the founding fathers intended that.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 17

Post by the mingo » February 26th, 2018, 9:52 am

I was 17 when I fell in love the first time
And a few times after that
But nothing can compare to this..
* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 17

Post by Terri » February 26th, 2018, 12:24 pm

i didn't get you on first reading
thank g-d for other people's comments
but the language caught me
I conclude you can shut the bees in
but can't keep them from being bees
thanks

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Post by mnaz » February 26th, 2018, 2:14 pm

I suppose that's kind of what I mean. We never get dialogue; we get monologue. We get stock phrases and heartless platitudes. Only inside that insular, warped world and mentality can a ban (or even any form of restriction for godssake) on assault rifles be viewed as "disarming Americans." I mean, how can you even have any sort of meaningful conversation with that point of view?... It just seems impossible.

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