the beauty - pt. 1

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the beauty - pt. 1

Post by Glorious Amok » May 7th, 2005, 1:11 pm

well i guess that freedom means something
different to everyone
me, i'm gonna be reborn into a bed of sky
pillowy nursery clouds my rebirth place
i'm gonna be nesting in the heavens
rockin' a-bye in the boughs of the possiblitrees
i'm gonna put this rainbow to rest
let this spectrum find her own big bang theory
burst into universal reform
shatter into a thousand baby colours
and raise 'em up right, like my own
i can't stay a star, being wished upon
i am a bird now
spiralling through oceans of dimensions
seas of lunar tranquilities
now that i know what wishes are for
i make a new one every second
and towards it i naturally soar.





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Post by hester_prynne » May 7th, 2005, 1:35 pm

"...shatter into a thousand baby colours and raise 'em up right, like my own....."

fantastic line in a fantastic read. I'm with you Glam.....

totally dig this!

H 8)

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Post by izeveryboyin » May 7th, 2005, 3:11 pm

i loved it!! serene, yet real. interesting. lovely.

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Post by Glorious Amok » May 7th, 2005, 9:07 pm

soaring hungrily
and all is everywhere music
composed of pictures finger-painted over the silence
circus music soundtrack moves me
like a marrionnette through space with the resistance of liquid
drum rhythms supporting my high-wire balancing act
the mirth keeps me up in the air.

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Post by Glorious Amok » May 7th, 2005, 9:10 pm

this music seduces me
i'm suddenly overwhelmed by the beauty
this rhythm trance dances me
escaping me into a frenzy of auto-eroticism
of hither and yon acts of lesbianism
rescuing me from random dark moments of loss
of vision and rudimentary id control
dream states, recaptured later
in slow-motion pockets of daylight
i'm dancing in a field of white daisies, remembering things.

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Post by Glorious Amok » May 7th, 2005, 11:52 pm

i wanna dance
i wanna sway like the tall grasses graced
by sheets of wind
i want to sweat and pulse
expand and contract
collapse into total submission
of nature's chaos over will's discipline
i want to leap from the sky
jump off this cliff
and land in a graceful
fourth position.

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Post by izeveryboyin » May 9th, 2005, 3:37 pm

i especially like the second photo. Where'd you get it from?


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Post by Glorious Amok » May 9th, 2005, 8:10 pm

i took that photo, it's a puppet that haunts the hallways of the theatre i'm currently working at. it's one of my favourites too.
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Post by izeveryboyin » May 10th, 2005, 11:51 am

it's fantastic!! You're a really good photographer.

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