Approaching Storm

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edsiejka
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Approaching Storm

Post by edsiejka » April 13th, 2018, 2:08 pm

Approaching Storm


by Edmund Siejka


It was unexpected
For what everyone thought
Would be a mild April
That no one saw it coming.

The first signs
Came over the horizon
Thick grayish fingers
Slowly inching towards us
A warning of coming snow.

Waiting at the train station
Anxious to get home
I could do nothing
But watch the light flurries,
Floating gently in the wind,
Come down
Faster and faster
Heavier and heavier.

In the station’s waiting room
An old man sat down
Bad leg stretched outward
Cane by his good side.

Unbuttoning his top coat
He said to no one in particular
‘First hint of snow here
And everything slows down.’
I nodded quietly.

A woman waiting at the far end
Had a worried look
That only parents have
As her daughter,
Really only a child,
Held her mother’s hand
And recited her numbers
From one to twenty
In a voice as clear as an angel.

The old man, tilting his head to one side,
Listened
Counting with the girl
Tapping the cement floor with his cane.

Outside the snow continued unabated
Covering everything
In a heavy white blanket
So that even the tallest trees,
Limbs outstretched,
Knelt before nature’s might.

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Re: Approaching Storm

Post by mtmynd » April 13th, 2018, 2:24 pm

Well done!
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Re: Approaching Storm

Post by the mingo » April 14th, 2018, 11:07 am

A few hundred years ago a zen monk in Japan said:

"Nature's a killer, I won't sing to it." His name was Ikkyu. I agree with him and also agree with mtmynd's take on this piece.
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Re: Approaching Storm

Post by sasha » April 14th, 2018, 11:52 am

exquisite snapshots of humble moments in real life - if there were a LIKE button, I'd hit it
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