Cavity Rabbits

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Cavity Rabbits

Post by the mingo » May 28th, 2018, 1:31 pm

I can't find the poem
that goes with this title.

I've looked all over.

I think the ants carried it off
chewed it up and regurgitated it
as food for new ant babies

I don't begrudge them a life
but

the little fuckers!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Cavity Rabbits

Post by creativesoul » May 28th, 2018, 4:27 pm

The sun was beating down
One red ant and I

At the market the veadpy looking thing
Carrying a twig as big as he is


Her friend waited somewhere with her car
Shouting everywhere that she goes
For shock value
Newspapers blow in the wind
Words blow out of her mouth
Like a whale with a spout
She drives like it’s a truck

She announces her arrival and departure
Tirelessly watching what other people are doing
Who they are doing
Yes m so tired
I just want a ride to the hospital
Last edited by creativesoul on May 28th, 2018, 7:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Cavity Rabbits

Post by the mingo » May 28th, 2018, 4:42 pm

**Jana** 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Cavity Rabbits

Post by creativesoul » May 28th, 2018, 7:55 pm

Yes
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Cavity Rabbits

Post by the mingo » May 29th, 2018, 7:42 am

A good Yes is worth forty No's any day of the week and three times on Sunday 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Cavity Rabbits

Post by saw » May 29th, 2018, 8:27 am

A most Dino-esque poem...we could substitute kiwis for the ants.. 8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
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Re: Cavity Rabbits

Post by the mingo » May 30th, 2018, 12:20 pm

Kiwis? Why didn't I think of that ! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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