12:22 p.m.

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the mingo
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12:22 p.m.

Post by the mingo » August 18th, 2018, 11:10 am

Me and Princess are trying
to cool down here
man, it got muggy out there

Aretha died this morning

I am working all day

ok, Babe, what time
will you get out?
thx for the news 'bout Aretha
I figured she was on her way out
thanks

I made a dump run
and you got a package

Sorry, Babe,
I was in Mexico when you texted

just now saw it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: 12:22 p.m.

Post by saw » August 20th, 2018, 7:25 am

has a noir feel to it....the every day stuff that novels are made of...I like it !
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Re: 12:22 p.m.

Post by the mingo » August 20th, 2018, 1:36 pm

Thx saw, appreciate the read
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