Three Women

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sasha
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Three Women

Post by sasha » September 18th, 2018, 7:25 am

her eyes
mysterious crescents
of green moonlight

her cheekbones
regal adornment
for that smile

her breasts
the inverted cups
of my hands
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: Three Women

Post by saw » September 18th, 2018, 3:33 pm

a fine ode sasha........a special woman
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Three Women

Post by sasha » September 19th, 2018, 4:14 pm

thx, saw - each lady altered my trajectory through life, & changed me in some way..... still occasionally connect with two of them, but the 3rd, alas, is no longer with us....
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Re: Three Women

Post by saw » September 21st, 2018, 7:48 pm

aah thanx sasha for added pieces....I couldn't make up mind if it was really 3 women or 3 women in one....I like the economy of the poem a lot
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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