Aquarium Girl

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the mingo
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Aquarium Girl

Post by the mingo » December 26th, 2018, 8:35 am

your jar of water
on the table
you, petting your actor bee,
the streets: spurious sand

one's own voice,

wasteful,

encouraging -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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mtmynd
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Re: Aquarium Girl

Post by mtmynd » December 26th, 2018, 4:10 pm

your 20 aimed words hit the target!

fine job using these words, hitting the panzer brigade in the gut of hunger, starvation in complete destiny withers the choice to ONE.
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Re: Aquarium Girl

Post by the mingo » December 29th, 2018, 2:51 am

Thx, Cecil, got restless wind here on the plateau tonight, woke me up and there was nothing for it then but to make coffee and start a fire
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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