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"Sorry For The inconvenience."

Post by stilltrucking » May 25th, 2005, 10:02 pm

God's last message to mankind. Douglass Adams
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Post by Arcadia » May 25th, 2005, 10:20 pm

to go cruising for cereal babes...wow...it sounds misterious!
good luck,

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Post by tinkerjack » May 25th, 2005, 10:43 pm

. Well to tell you the truth I wasn't expecting any replies to this post.
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Post by stilltrucking » May 25th, 2005, 11:12 pm

text box #1252
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Post by stilltrucking » May 25th, 2005, 11:37 pm

I wish I could move this. Doreen I thought it was going to be more creative. Just a blog. Could you put it on trailer park if arcadia don't mind?
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Post by stilltrucking » May 26th, 2005, 6:57 am

Don't waste your time replying
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Post by stilltrucking » May 26th, 2005, 7:50 am

How you going to get those security mom's to vote for another dirty little war.
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Post by Arcadia » May 26th, 2005, 1:12 pm

go Forrest, go! (it´s a joke)
thanatos eros thing... I don´t know, I´m not freudian: I only have an old Pierre Grimal greco-roman dictionary.
don´t worry s-t, you´ll find or re-find a 70% real person someday!
saludos,

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Post by stilltrucking » May 26th, 2005, 1:50 pm

Thanks
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Post by Doreen Peri » May 26th, 2005, 5:34 pm

There are some absolutely brilliant phrases and images and thoughts and descriptions in this thread... I love it..!!! It begs to be read aloud. So, guess what? I read it aloud! lol ;)

Keep on truckin', Truckin'!

Why would I want to move something so creative to anywhere other than Creative? :D

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that is some crazy shit

Post by wurdjam » May 26th, 2005, 8:52 pm

I don't know, man, but I think you got some things to work out in that .......................

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Post by stilltrucking » May 26th, 2005, 9:26 pm

Thanks DP but I think it sounds too much like some cowboy trying to fuck Mz Kitty with his boots on.

This time I am saving my deletions. Going to work on it, emphasize the pure etherial nature of human love. no nasty sex for me, I am way too pure for that. And I ain't one bit jealous of those guys that post about there wonderful erections they get from smelling the roses.
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Post by stilltrucking » May 26th, 2005, 9:26 pm

Vive La Difference

and so now everyone knows why I have to get the hell out of Dodge for awhile
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Post by Arcadia » May 27th, 2005, 1:47 pm

a sea burial! it sounds great if you are already dead. Around here each day more people want to spread their ashes on water (river water, for geographic reasons).
my elders decided some time ago that maybe it was a good idea to have all our bones together under tierra . It´s a contaminating idea but they already paid for it.
auch, sorry... I put you in the front line again...but just for a moment.
saludos,

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Post by stilltrucking » May 27th, 2005, 4:48 pm

Geez I was just going to say the real reason I wanted burial at sea was just to get one more boat ride.
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