Sole to Soul

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saw
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Sole to Soul

Post by saw » February 20th, 2022, 3:39 pm

a Redtail Hawk soars
among the pillow clouds
I gaze upward to catch her majesty
but wonder, what do I really know
seeing only her white underbelly
I mean, when you look into my eyes
can you see the aches in my bones....
It ain't quite that simple most days
I love the diversity of the forest
the alto voices of the highest limbs
the basso voices of the mycelium network
Under my Feet !.....now that's Roots Music !
I think of all the miles on my boot bottoms
caked with the Soil du Jour
some has fallen off, gone home to the ground again
to be picked up randomly by the next hiker
who is also eager to bond, and carried briefly
for the earth can only be borrowed.....
absorb this gift of impermanence
let it permeate your soles
let your soul be enriched
by the complex fragrance
you get to take home with you
revel in opening that closet door
from time to time
'til it's time for the next immersion
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Sole to Soul

Post by judih » February 20th, 2022, 11:01 pm

how i love this poem, steve. Something to be treasured.

these brilliant lines:
the earth can only be borrowed.....
absorb this gift of impermanence
let it permeate your soles

saw
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Re: Sole to Soul

Post by saw » February 21st, 2022, 11:25 pm

Thanx so much judih.....appreciate the feedback
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Sole to Soul

Post by creativesoul » February 27th, 2022, 1:08 am

I feel as if I am listening
To the places inside of you when you write
Thank you
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Sole to Soul

Post by mnaz » February 27th, 2022, 8:44 pm

Yes, roots music. Sole to soul. Love it.

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