City At Night

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edsiejka
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City At Night

Post by edsiejka » March 5th, 2022, 5:43 pm

City At Night

by Edmund Siejka


It was cold outside
I hadn’t shaved in days and I was hungry
I was going to walk it
Only a few blocks
Through the same streets I walked every day
So how bad could it be
At 1 AM?

The Diner’s neon sign
Shone in sharp relief in the night.
A greasy spoon type of place
Inexpensive meals
And large portions.

The waiter leaned against the chrome soda dispenser
Dark circles under his eyes
Anything good? I asked
Everything’s good he answered
Quickly taking my order
He resumed his post.

I’ve been coming here for awhile and I don’t ever think I saw you around
Without turning around
I answered the stranger
I’m just getting something to eat.

I’ve been around lots of places he said
And I think I can spot a victim of disappointment
I’m a writer by day and at night a denizen of the streets
Because of who I am I have become frugal
So, I eat here to stay alive.

Ignoring him I started eating
When his chair creaked and swiveled
I caught sight of his back when he left.

I left the Diner around 2 am
Footsteps echoed around me
Anxious I looked around
To be sure
I was alone.

Up ahead
Two men were talking
The taller of the two leaned against a car
Arms crossed against his chest
Watching me as I got closer
Cold night, isn’t it? he asked.

My breath curled out in the frigid night
I carefully answered,
Yes, it’s a little cold
Out for a night time stroll? he inquired
Before I could answer, the shorter of the two turned away
It was then I quickly turned
And hurriedly walked away.

Behind me the thudding sound of a car door slammed shut
Loud laughter broke the quiet of the night
Theirs was a private joke
And I was the intruder.

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Re: City At Night

Post by judih » March 5th, 2022, 11:10 pm

fascinating!
dark and murky

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Re: City At Night

Post by saw » March 7th, 2022, 9:11 am

like a scene from a noir movie
I like it !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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