judie's haiku after no more tear
- judih
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judie s writes:
i
stand stare
disillusioned disbelieving
missing cursing
you
i want to thank you all for your insights, especially judih for putting my words out there for yours (and for her hugs).
may there always be more glee in our lives than sorrow.... judie
i
stand stare
disillusioned disbelieving
missing cursing
you
i want to thank you all for your insights, especially judih for putting my words out there for yours (and for her hugs).
may there always be more glee in our lives than sorrow.... judie
- stilltrucking
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Sorry to here about your loss, I hope there is one child left to carry on.
Macho
April Funeral
Rainy day
brings black tears
paper yarmulke
we were all young American jews
not religious
the worst kind of jew
assimilated
Israel just another government
Hebrew National cemetry
Next door to a slaughter house
Rabbi speaks, hogs scream
this is just a first draft, I know it ain't right but it is pretty much exactly as if they wrote themselves Would be interested in hearing what is wrong about them,
I kind of like them so it don't matter. Just let me know what ya'll think.
thanks
Macho
April Funeral
Rainy day
brings black tears
paper yarmulke
we were all young American jews
not religious
the worst kind of jew
assimilated
Israel just another government
Hebrew National cemetry
Next door to a slaughter house
Rabbi speaks, hogs scream
this is just a first draft, I know it ain't right but it is pretty much exactly as if they wrote themselves Would be interested in hearing what is wrong about them,
I kind of like them so it don't matter. Just let me know what ya'll think.
thanks
- stilltrucking
- Posts: 20607
- Joined: October 24th, 2004, 12:29 pm
- Location: Oz or somepLace like Kansas
I wanted to say goodbye
I saw him from the hallway
He was going home at last with hospice, to stay
at last, defeated by the malignant melanoma,
large white rectangular scoops, in white,
on his head, bald as well, a cubist Buddha,
mas para venir.....tengo que fumar mota loco con mi sobrino.
un sabado facil.
iIwent in about 4 pm, said general greetings,
like, "hope you' re gonna do well at home," he smiled and nodded, it was cool, next scene later on, him surrounded by family, a tall young kid looks like him, long brown hair,
The guy spent a year at DaNang, got sprayed, hey not directly, but the so-called "ranch hands" c-132 cargo planes fitted with these spraying apparatus, wow, the spray drifted on the winds, hovered over vast empty spaces, softly raining down ...
Told him stuff, too, general bullshit, he was a lifer, 9 years enlisted, then got commissioned, had to get a bachelopr's degree,, cool, retyired as a major after 23 years. he's registered with the agent orange survey, but no matter, too late for him, unnless therer are some survivors' bennies.
orgullo=proud
the war drags on
recurring in his dreams
great orange mushroom cloud
nightmared dreaming bleeding men
lookouts tremmbing at the shore
no man can find the war
I saw him from the hallway
He was going home at last with hospice, to stay
at last, defeated by the malignant melanoma,
large white rectangular scoops, in white,
on his head, bald as well, a cubist Buddha,
mas para venir.....tengo que fumar mota loco con mi sobrino.
un sabado facil.
iIwent in about 4 pm, said general greetings,
like, "hope you' re gonna do well at home," he smiled and nodded, it was cool, next scene later on, him surrounded by family, a tall young kid looks like him, long brown hair,
The guy spent a year at DaNang, got sprayed, hey not directly, but the so-called "ranch hands" c-132 cargo planes fitted with these spraying apparatus, wow, the spray drifted on the winds, hovered over vast empty spaces, softly raining down ...
Told him stuff, too, general bullshit, he was a lifer, 9 years enlisted, then got commissioned, had to get a bachelopr's degree,, cool, retyired as a major after 23 years. he's registered with the agent orange survey, but no matter, too late for him, unnless therer are some survivors' bennies.
orgullo=proud
the war drags on
recurring in his dreams
great orange mushroom cloud
nightmared dreaming bleeding men
lookouts tremmbing at the shore
no man can find the war
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
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