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pleasure chests

Post by wylde » July 29th, 2005, 3:55 am

.

vagabond vapid skies
enthral

cotton cutlass euphonic
sprawls

digger diamond and slewty
sapphire

spindle upon ears of india rubber
desire

flotsam plank and hooks of
ticks

tock breathless blood into
needled pricks

penchant pirates pilfer penzance
as pleasure chests canonize
thighs

fired in diffidence

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Post by judih » July 29th, 2005, 6:07 am

don't know whether to put the pieces together
or dance around it in a jig

parallel constructions

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Post by wylde » August 1st, 2005, 2:34 am

...definitely for dancing away...always...jus so long that isnt a jig sore...

parallel constructions....? for sure there is a conduit of energies moving in both directions...


thanks for your time. and thoughts.

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Post by mtmynd » August 4th, 2005, 12:22 pm

a strong parallel to your 69th post and context

it's the sound
it's the meter
it's complete
it's wylde
it's good

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Post by wylde » August 11th, 2005, 7:33 am

.thanks.

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Post by tinkerjack » December 16th, 2005, 2:16 pm

just a mind fuk for me

thanks, I needed that.
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Post by wylde » December 17th, 2005, 6:32 am

*offers you a smoke*

..it was good for me...


thanks.

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Post by WIREMAN » December 20th, 2005, 8:00 pm

......sounds like a great place to be.......

..........or not to be.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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