No Mistaking Maldrake the Innocent

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No Mistaking Maldrake the Innocent

Post by mtmynd » June 9th, 2005, 11:08 am

an earthbound comet
spinning with delirium
igniting the bouquet
set before the valentine
as words drift seamlessly
into pungent soundscapes
replete with foam and figs
harboring the testicular joy
wrapped between blankets
woven from sonic booms
unleashed into the skies
resembling pincushions
fashioned from fantasy
lost in echoes bouncing
endlessly in the void of tremolos


(no mistaking maldrake the innocent)

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Post by mousey1 » June 9th, 2005, 11:46 am

:) There may be some mistaking of maldrake the innocent! We shall see. I'll mull on this one for awhile as usual and get back to you. :)

All this interpretive, critiquing stuff is consuming...of time and mind...mt. :)
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Post by mousey1 » July 29th, 2005, 12:35 pm

ORGASM!!!!!

It's about the big O

O O O!!!!

I don't think I'd change a word!

That's what I get from it anyway! Am I correct? I Ope so!

"No mistaking maldrake the innocent"

nO

(if I'm wrong I'll be sOOOOOOO embarassed!!! :oops:)
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mtmynd » July 29th, 2005, 1:04 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: mousey, my friend! two months to figure this one out, eh? with those time limits set to my poems, i'd better hang it up to dry... :wink: i really like your interp, kid... really! i'll buy that one!!

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Post by mousey1 » July 29th, 2005, 2:46 pm

That's not the only thing it takes me two months to reach btw....

but....

let's not go there!!!! :oops:

Orgasm it is then.....righty O!


(OI am so easily amused!) :D

I am O for 2!!!


ps: don't hang it up to dry.....if you don't use it you'll lose it!!!
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Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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