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Too late?

Post by abstroint » August 8th, 2005, 11:18 am

Truly
I was mistaken
It was too early
Timing
fucked me

Got there too early
Stood around
Decided to go for a walk
Went too far
Came back
And the meeting had been adjourned


(for an old friend, who, I haven’t decided if he’s just too damn crazy to have not given up on me or what, but, Thanks man)

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Post by iblieve » August 9th, 2005, 4:27 pm

The decisions we make make us in the end, sounds like a bad day for decisions to me, nice write. "C"
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Post by gypsyjoker » August 9th, 2005, 4:33 pm

Sounds like a good walk to me
But I like to walk
I like it a lot.
you were late for the meeting
on time for the poem
10-4 on the nice write
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Post by stilltrucking » August 9th, 2005, 6:58 pm

I like it even better today.

here is a bad walk
droopy drawers
elastic shot in jocky shorts
underear down around my knees
worse part I was wearing cut offs
I had to waddle home like a duck :oops:

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Post by abstroint » August 11th, 2005, 9:15 am

iblieve thanks for the read

gypsyjoker love your handle

truck man, I had lost a lot of weight, enough I had to buy new clothes, and missed a pair of big underwear when I was pulling out the stuff that was too big. In a rush one morning I got dressed too fast to notice that I had put on a pair that was way too big. I spent the whole day at work looking around to make sure no one was coming so I could stick my hand down the back of my pants and pull up my underwear that kept sliding completely off my ass. It was a good day, laughed too damn hard at myself and the stuff I was doing to make sure no one would notice for it to be bad. I worked mostly outside then so who knows who saw what, out their windows.

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Post by WIREMAN » August 13th, 2005, 1:21 pm

hello artist...miss your words and visions
drop me a line sometime.........

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Post by abstroint » August 14th, 2005, 8:42 am

wireman

:D

very good to see you around again

drop ya a line soon

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