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generals dist gusting this poem.

Post by YABYUM » August 14th, 2005, 7:26 am

person said.
people talk.

revelations and abiritions be seech my fucking heads
see? i got this motivation sometimes i just haf a sit down unstrap Docs lase is

we know what we've been on through
me and Doc

sole of a soul sewn so random ridel'd

havent i been this here be
for
?

have not i walked tasted tested serene be lived and be gotten
this, all, this once, this before?

see i just gots lot ofs
and and is not a word and i hate it in poetry as much as
i and as

see?

frement regret.
bare toe your own fucking mind
i beg you and steal former line

gods time come
1914
generation that will see and as i
pass?

karigoriphacly i am continent second
a way
y way
jehovah

the words have now known
and
wind tears, wind tears
as i
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Post by jimboloco » August 15th, 2005, 6:24 pm

lingo from a long way ago
it could be an alternate grammar
flows along and besmirched
fossils
smile as one.
thanks.
wait for the drumers at the end of this wave
25,000 years from now
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by Axanderdeath » August 15th, 2005, 6:28 pm

havent i been this here be
for
?


I like that line
or lines--did not get your poem. It sound good as I mubled it under my breath though

some girls looked at me like I was crazy.[/i]
thus spoke G.A.P.

hester_prynne

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Post by hester_prynne » August 15th, 2005, 8:57 pm

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Post by YABYUM » August 15th, 2005, 9:06 pm

Imagine how the girls look at me when I'm writing this gibberish.
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Post by stilltrucking » August 15th, 2005, 10:47 pm

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Re: generals dist gusting this poem.

Post by Rat Bag » August 17th, 2005, 8:43 am

YABYUM wrote:havent i been this here be
for
?

have not i walked tasted tested serene be lived and be gotten
this, all, this once, this before?
infinite times
infinite more
This is the centre of the universe.
My tribe is gathered around me.
Behold me.
I AM.

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