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Post by iblieve » August 12th, 2005, 7:05 pm

Save me

Majestic beauty, my shining star
drop your vision in my crystal jar
where my hopes survive,
surrealistic dreams come alive.
Now can’t you see
staring back at me
how your beauty sets me free.
Turn around slowly
tear drops of joy to see
how your loveliness stirs my muse.
So much to love, so much to lose
pick and choose
the dreams we hold dear.
Pick and choose
the vision becomes clear.
Gaze into my eyes
lovely beauty I’m your mirror,
reflections so sincere.
Let me gaze
into your eyes dazed,
lost in your undulating waves
only love can save
me.
8-12-05
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Post by WIREMAN » August 13th, 2005, 1:08 pm

this sure does shine
poet of the DARC,
i'm back online with a new dsl
so I'll definitely come and jam at
your house...........

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Re: Save Me

Post by Axanderdeath » August 14th, 2005, 1:19 pm

iblieve wrote:Save me

Majestic beauty, my shining star
drop your vision in my crystal jar
where my hopes survive,
surrealistic dreams come alive.
Now can’t you see
staring back at me
how your beauty sets me free.
Turn around slowly
tear drops of joy to see
how your loveliness stirs my muse.
So much to love, so much to lose
pick and choose
the dreams we hold dear.
Pick and choose
the vision becomes clear.
Gaze into my eyes
lovely beauty I’m your mirror,
reflections so sincere.
Let me gaze
into your eyes dazed,
lost in your undulating waves
only love can save
me.
8-12-05
sam I am
green eggs and ham!!!
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by stilltrucking » August 14th, 2005, 7:42 pm

I envision my self at the bottom of an open grave, it is so deep that the night sky above me appears as a small rectangle of bright stars, they shine down on me with tender indifference. I want to reach out and embrace them.

Nice one C, I could really feel it.

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Post by iblieve » August 14th, 2005, 11:14 pm

Thanks wireman, the darc will enjoy your light and thank you still trucking you are very kind. "C"
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Post by jimboloco » August 15th, 2005, 10:50 am

ibelieve,
are you talkin to me :?:
what's that you say?
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[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by iblieve » August 30th, 2005, 4:54 pm

Naw Jim, was talking to a dandylion who blew her seeds of love all over me. In two weeks I will harvest those free floating seeds and make her my wife, the third time is a charm they say and she is charming. iblieve
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Post by alienpoet » August 31st, 2005, 4:20 am

Ah , beautiful poem ~!!!!! Love it.
read me, but don't play me backwards

dakota alien-sky raphael

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Post by jimboloco » August 31st, 2005, 10:15 am

aww inspired by love, how wonderful, indeed. your muse has been stirred :oops:

let's have some more of your happy love songs, ibelieve in you, db cooper, or is it bd?

enjoy friend

i married first time age 52, six years now

she was married once, for 20 years, 3 grown kids
now the oldest is my marijuana connection, and will market my absinthe with his buddy. :mrgreen:
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by iblieve » August 31st, 2005, 4:20 pm

thanks AP, I can always count on you for support.


Thanks Jim and I will try to find some happy stuff to feed my muse.
"C"
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