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Post by alienpoet » August 31st, 2005, 4:42 am

eyes find the door
of where we were before
but changing portals make confusion
picknchoose but u might lose
one
two
what's wrong with you?
three
four
what are you waiting for?
none
or
more

what's the score?

enter here don't enter there
eyes will find you everywhere
but yesterday is far away
and you won't find it anywhere

i hate bursting bubbles
but if i can't go home again...
why should you?

there's no place like home...
anymore
read me, but don't play me backwards

dakota alien-sky raphael

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Post by iblieve » August 31st, 2005, 4:14 pm

I love it and I loved the way you turned the last line around to mean the opposite of what it usually means. Good to see you here but we miss you in the darc. "C"
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Post by seven » September 2nd, 2005, 1:08 am

there's no place like home.
*searches sky*

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Post by stilltrucking » September 2nd, 2005, 2:12 am

home is a highway
home is the next mile marker
home is over the next rise
around the next bend


somebody drop a house on me while i am happy
you do good work AP

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