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love & trepidation

Post by mindbum » September 21st, 2005, 2:38 am

you were in my dream last night.
i walked through a dark room
where you were
sleeping on the floor.
you werent quite asleep
and i stopped and kneeled
by your pallet of blankets
and a flying carpet.

then,
your blankets were a tent
we were under.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim
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Post by mousey1 » September 21st, 2005, 2:54 am

Oh I like this mindbum....very much!

The flying carpet was a lovely touch.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mindbum » September 22nd, 2005, 1:11 am

a flying carpet is so much more romantic than a persian rug.

thanks.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim
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