Ruff Draft

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Axanderdeath
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Ruff Draft

Post by Axanderdeath » October 3rd, 2005, 2:01 pm

This is an extrem Rough copy of this story--if any want to try please do--I will fix a lot of it tomorow--


敵eoff what you up to?・ There it was slaks jack ass face, looking right at me with his scartisued face.
渡othing Slak, to work, telemarketing.・ I met slak on the steet. Back when I still enjoyed getting drunk everyday and being dirty, and bumming change. Slak looks different now too, cleaner, and he has less cuts on his face. Still lots of scares though. I was feeling kind of bord so I continued on.
都o, Slak, what you up to lately? 壮pearing change for drinking beer and kicking ass.樗 That was the slogan back in the day傭ack last summer. He said no, and he was telemarketing now too葉ellimarteting is not such a transition from bummiong change really, bumming change is probally more honest work! Slak siaid he REALLY had to go, as though he did not want to hurt what ever feelings he thought I had to be hurt.

to be cont...

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