Spider Webs (Visual Poetry)

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[hester_prynne]

Wow.
This is really good stuff, I really dig the words on the spiderweb, it all just really works.
Very effective.
Thanks bro!
enjoyed this muchly!

H

[Dixie]

oustanding piece

I love the visual...and the ending lines...very cool

[joel]

I wish I had such a gift for visual art, or even the idea of where to begin poeticizing with my eyes. Well done! While I can't give back in pictures, my sights are set off:

When evergreen knows jealousy
for change as broadleaf brilliancy,
deciduous and radiant—

When continents for oceans yearn,
whose plastic oscillations churn
above Earth’s fade-off gradient—

When organized on textile skies
the silhouettes of geese and flies
conform and swarm in paradox—

When towers penetrate fresh land
like virgin rape and phallic stand
the envy of still fertile blocks—

as always life sustains,
confusion then remains—
or movement rather gains
in turns, in waxes, wanes
whose fullness Static failed.

When, for love’s greatness, I submit
the heights of joy to shadows’ pit—
take comfort: love is so detailed.

[iblieve]

Thanks you my friends, I always strive to find new ways to present my poetry. It will soon be Halloween my favorite time of years so have a happy one. "C"