hot maple syrup ku

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Post by judih » December 16th, 2005, 12:01 pm

ku in december
soft flow into solstice
maple syrup sigh
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Post by tinkerjack » December 16th, 2005, 1:37 pm

2nd
on candle power
five days to
solstice light

first attemp

running on candle power
five days to burn
until solstice

I light the candle
Presence says
Hello buddha Jack
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Post by joel » December 16th, 2005, 7:29 pm

solstice equality
mathematical hope
dag en nag apartheid

delicate winter clouded sky
infinite white on deepest blue
thinnest steam over shallowest
delicate summer puddle
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Post by Artguy » December 17th, 2005, 12:38 am

Dripping gently
leafless old tree
sweetness born
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Post by judih » December 17th, 2005, 12:46 am

muddy forest
pails aligned with sun
sap a long-lost friend
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Post by tinkerjack » December 17th, 2005, 8:17 am

shenandoah smile
sweetness waited for me
the sap is in texas

darkness grows longer
solstice equilibrium
four candles away
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