Do not sing to me

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lilywhite
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Do not sing to me

Post by lilywhite » February 24th, 2006, 9:37 am

Nightingale songs
daggers
unwelcome visitors
all bleeding hearts
cannot conquer
black heart
with piteous
love songs
their melody
salt in open
wounds

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Re: Do not sing to me

Post by Axanderdeath » February 24th, 2006, 9:51 am

lilywhite wrote:Nightingale songs
daggers
unwelcome visitors
all bleeding hearts
cannot conquer
black heart
with piteous
love songs
their melody
salt in open
wounds
Behind snarl
is a
sad little girl (boy) saying
love me love me
please
thus spoke G.A.P.

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lilywhite
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Post by lilywhite » February 24th, 2006, 12:05 pm

oh contraire, i hate others as much as myself.

Death hhuuumm.

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Post by joel » February 24th, 2006, 12:14 pm

Deeper misanthropy would care enough to feel the salt in the wounds. The poems hits me like a falling leaf...on its way to decay, but unable to ignore feel the resistance of breath all around throughout a wavy descent. So long as there's hate, there's still a relationship. Stagnation only knows complete indifference. Beautiful.
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Post by mnaz » February 25th, 2006, 6:42 am

piteous love songs.

I hear that...

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Post by lilywhite » February 25th, 2006, 11:10 am

what's love
but a second hand
emotion. Tina Turner.

thanks for the responses.

lily.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 25th, 2006, 11:29 am

Two by two and side by side
Love's gonna find you yes it is
You just can't hide
You'll hear it call
Your heart will fall
Then love will fly
It's gonna soar
I don't care for any casanova thing
All I can say is
Love stinks


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Interesting poem, the replies too.


thanks

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Post by lilywhite » February 25th, 2006, 11:52 am

do i know you?

love pointless
lust pleasurable

love hurtful
lust fulfilling

love blind
lust knows
what it really is.

lily

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Post by stilltrucking » February 25th, 2006, 4:00 pm

No I don't think you know me I may have posted to the Scroll as Thunder Chicken.


Love is sleepless
Lust gnaws

Love is possessive
Lust is anonymous

Lust is wired in
Love is a choice

Love is a trick of the light
Lust is a truck

True love is perfect kindness

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Post by lilywhite » February 25th, 2006, 7:39 pm

no, we do not know each other, such a pity.

my appearance in 2000.

thanks for the reply.

lily.

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Post by mnaz » February 25th, 2006, 10:41 pm

then again,

why not sing to each other?

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