loving lolita

[joel]

Illegal, yes; and valid love it’s not—
but knowledge fails and wisdom proves too weak
that lust restrained I’d interact with you.
So each deflected glance cannot deny
your throne in my periphery. And nor
could any queer avoidance of a touch
refute my will to hold, caress, protect
you. Would I saw you also incorrect
an object for my hungered grief. For such
impossibility, you I adore
as autumn yearns for vernal vesper sky,
for lengthened days, for suns erect and blue
dressed eves impossible for fall to seek—
illegal, invalid, extant and lost to rot.

[mousey1]

I like this.

Shades of Shakeyspeare.

I do stumble on... "Would I saw you also incorrect" it doesn't sit well upon my eye or ear.

Anyway, I'm a sucker for the romantic tone of this here piece. But I have to say...

No Lolita is a good Lolita...so back away, back slowly away.

[joel]

Quickly, back away quickly! Thanks for the comments...and yes, I agree on what the status of a Lolita should be. But when they catch you off guard--it doesn't matter how respectful my mama raised me to be. And that's why places like this become so important: now a graveyard for loving Lolita.

[dolphin girl]

Lovely write.


an illegal love, best get her papers. sorry frame of mind thing.


love lots