Speak to Me

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Ann Bingham
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Speak to Me

Post by Ann Bingham » March 30th, 2006, 8:22 pm

SPEAK TO ME
03-30-06



Dressed in green
Looking the gypsy part
Allowing the gypsy heart
To sing in Spring.

Rededicating myself to life
Through the soil I walk upon
Feeling each blade of grasses song
My heart rises up with such might.

Breath deep allowing the fresh air to speak
Allowing it to whisper thru me to become
The force giving life to some
I shall be the one they seek.

Rising up like the morning sun
I spread my arms in undying love
And soar on high with others doves
This is my heart in all its sums.

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Post by Diana Moon Glampers » March 31st, 2006, 2:37 pm

Ya know Deb that was pretty good for a
a goof, a dumb blond,
Man that was like a Joni Mitchel song if you don't mind the comparasion

you leave me smilling when you go.

gracias

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Post by Ann Bingham » March 31st, 2006, 4:46 pm

Was the blond that wrote this.

Yeah experimenting with rhyme, not my best.

Joni Mitchel you say.


love lots
Deb.

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Post by joel » April 1st, 2006, 2:10 pm

hurrah for rhyme-scheme experimentation! awesome! as is this poem. :) i'm not a blonde, but a premature bald still can relate.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by Ann Bingham » April 1st, 2006, 9:33 pm

Thank you Joel, but seriously was the blond in me that wrote this, she's too damn happy all the time. Thank you for reading

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