first attempt at a thought on (virtual) paper

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joel
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first attempt at a thought on (virtual) paper

Post by joel » April 1st, 2006, 2:17 pm

More hidden raise the endless depths above
all finite dust beneath, than hides your love
for me—transparency intuited
because such honesty as love cannot
but peak around the walls we hope contain
it. Shulammite, why not return, return?
Your breach of faith, your love held quietly:
are you afraid you’d cheat on Him or me
by true confession love—love I discern
has always dwelled on hopes you’d ascertain
your final life within my love. And what
is faith but trusted love requited?—
find faith in me, then hide in me your love
and final trust: with truth, no cheated love.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by mousey1 » April 1st, 2006, 2:31 pm

Does love peak, peek, pique around the walls
at love uncertain?

Perhaps.

I peeked
and ran away

shrieking!
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by joel » April 1st, 2006, 7:22 pm

yo' pick. :)
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by Ann Bingham » April 1st, 2006, 8:56 pm

torn between two lovers.

trusted love requited. I get mixed signals in this.


love lots

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