Wanderings

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dolphin girl
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Wanderings

Post by dolphin girl » April 1st, 2006, 12:28 am

Swimming though a sea of minds
Amazed at the wonders that I find
A maze of never ending thought
The kind that cannot be bought.
Meandering around neurons
Seeking a type of electron
The kind that shocks into reality
And reveils a true seciety.
Weeding my way around lies
Unaccepting of the why's
And questioning myself
(If I believe in self)
And seek the truth
Without seeking proof.
Life is mearly a game
In this there is no shame
As the earth comes sinking into my world
I realize it is I who holds the pearl.
Love is but a whisper away, listen.

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Post by stilltrucking » April 1st, 2006, 10:24 am

loved this one
down on some quantum level of my being
it resonated

a sea of minds
never ending thought
but below the surface of

the storm and drang of the the surface brain storms


I swem in the beauty


of still water running deep

there is no shame

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dolphin girl
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Post by dolphin girl » April 1st, 2006, 10:42 am

Thank you ST. So nice to always read you here.

love lots
Love is but a whisper away, listen.

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Re: Wanderings

Post by joel » April 1st, 2006, 2:08 pm

dolphin girl wrote: Seeking a type of electron
The kind that shocks into reality
sweet. :) i like this image a lot--seeking the infinite movement. sweet.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by dolphin girl » April 1st, 2006, 9:51 pm

Thank you so much joel. So glad to run free.


love lots

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