The Junk Collector

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~K
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The Junk Collector

Post by ~K » July 18th, 2006, 6:55 am

I saw her wings
fall off
& watched you
try to glue them
back on
but they never
worked...

before or after

Still

I will wrestle
your demons
until they
swear allegiance

or change their address...

I am the martyr's daughter;
a fool for all your garbage.

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joel
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Re: The Junk Collector

Post by joel » July 18th, 2006, 7:55 am

~K wrote:but they never
worked...

before or after
isn't it funny how we try to fix things we think are broken to perform what we believe they should perform--though they never had, even in perfect condition?

great poem
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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~K
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Post by ~K » July 18th, 2006, 8:00 am

it is
the way
we are
to want to
improve
perfection

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Post by abstroint » July 18th, 2006, 12:21 pm

"Art is where you find it. Sometimes, it's in the trash."

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~K
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Post by ~K » July 18th, 2006, 12:25 pm

Art
is
everywhere

our
eyes
wander

paths
are good
to stray from

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Post by Ann Bingham » July 21st, 2006, 8:42 am

"I will wrestle
your demons
until they
swear allegiance"

these lines especially struck me. An torn between a mother protecting the child from the world, and a lover vowing to stand by his/her side to the bitter end, fighting beside them the demons of the emotions. I really love this write ~K.

love lots

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Post by ~K » July 23rd, 2006, 12:25 am

:D

Thank you very much. That is probably my favorite line that I have ever written so I am really glad you liked it!

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