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Perdida
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what a heavy throbbing beat there

Post by Perdida » August 1st, 2006, 5:34 pm

like a fixed kiss, you held me:
and my heart took refuge

what a heavy throbbing beat there

an ocean of dream, saying yes
then no, then no

you are the summer
you are the sun
you are
daughter of the heavens

and i

am the drowned woman
rapt in your sea skin

a mass of birds flee from me

i tremble as i rest
on the goblets of your breasts

i see eternity in motion

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Post by judih » August 2nd, 2006, 8:28 am

beautifully jewelled, perdida

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Post by abstroint » August 5th, 2006, 9:57 am

yes beautiful read
took me there and i don't want to ever leave[/quote]

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Post by Lucy! » August 5th, 2006, 10:12 am

I love how you let us indulge in these memories while leaving the mystery intact

-Lucy

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