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judih
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Post by judih » September 17th, 2006, 3:08 pm

really good to see ya back, doreen.
in summation and interpretation, glad you provided verse and rhythm for those spell-check deprived folk.

let the beach beckon us all.

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Post by Axanderdeath » September 17th, 2006, 6:00 pm

I hardly have said a word on this one--I am really not that pissed--say what you want--and the spelling is shity and I do need to work on it and it is embarassing for me--I am not perfect and loss my temper--maybe mousey was not being a malisouse as I thought--some times I leave the misspelling because they make a pun or a double meaning--but most of the time it is lazy--me lazy--I am glad that I am writing in this day in age ecause if not I would not be able to write--spelling does matter--but I can respond however I want to anything and that is why this is a good site--

geoff

ps any one have sugestions on name for an Axander board???
I will not get angry about suggestions no matter how scaving..
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by Dave The Dov » September 17th, 2006, 6:32 pm

How about "Dieing To Be Heard" it would tie in with your name!!!!
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Post by judih » September 18th, 2006, 2:10 am

dying (spellcheck)

how bout

Off the Road
While I think of it
Catch me if you can

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Post by stilltrucking » September 18th, 2006, 4:21 am

How about
It is my greatest joy in life
to piss old farts off and make them
rant and rave.


OR
you could steal a line from Plath and call it

"I am not cruel, only truthful--- The eye of a little god,"

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Post by Axanderdeath » January 7th, 2007, 6:55 pm

I AM SO GREAT
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by mnaz » January 7th, 2007, 10:56 pm

what is she to you?

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