fancy (thirst)

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Arcadia
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fancy (thirst)

Post by Arcadia » October 4th, 2006, 6:31 pm

we can't joke no more on weather reports:
circular birds & wind
dark/grey/violet sky
crazy green & solid forms
gives them reason.

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Post by mnaz » October 5th, 2006, 2:41 am

reason is an angle.

i've seen bits and pieces of it.

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Post by Arcadia » October 5th, 2006, 1:16 pm

the original title was something like "on the futility of thought" but I decided to change it.

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Post by stilltrucking » October 5th, 2006, 10:23 pm

the futility of language
the bewtichment of thought

reason is the angle of incidence
the refraction of light from the facets of the diamond mind.


Don't mean nothing
I just like how it shines.
I liked your poem too
What ever it meant.

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Post by Arcadia » October 6th, 2006, 1:36 pm

bewtichment? nice word!

no idea what it means... It only happened that I was about to leave, the weather was a bit dramatic, there was a weather report about "meteorologic emergency" on the radio (the terminology had slightly changed in the last years, they never announced you an storm directly, just in case), it didn't rain decently in about eight months and I was searching the umbrella I was supposed to have somewhere, I looked at the window and I noticed suddenly that an umbrella would be totally inutil and then I left.

I hope your walking meditation is on!!

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