If I confess, will you forgive?

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joel
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If I confess, will you forgive?

Post by joel » October 13th, 2006, 9:50 pm

If I confess, will you forgive? Too long
perhaps I’ve entertained some character
ersatz for you. I thought her love; and wrong
as I may well have been, I sculpted her
to honor you with brilliant grace as sure
and great as you possess my highest dreams
for paradise—bold, intimate and pure
and sweet in safety harbored. Times it seems
I’m too awake for silliness; and seems
you’ve claimed reality and truths that I
withheld— I’ll once confess my sorry themes
of love: I’ve loved you, yes; if lately I
have love confessed, I’ve loved. Will you forgive
me, please, before I wake again to live?
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by creativesoul » October 14th, 2006, 1:52 am

forgiveness brings healing into the circle
very powerful
wiling to claim such persuasive adornments
in the effort to heal the hearts of those that choose to love in a sensual manner
to cherish that which is often misunderstood
to enliven the aspects of the differences
forgiveness marries the light
sadness stayed in the dark
a choice is always powerful

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Post by panta rhei » October 14th, 2006, 5:02 am

joel:

!!!!

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Post by Arcadia » October 14th, 2006, 9:07 am

do you want the recursive but each time different deep tide
or only the word yes?


interesting text, joel!

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