I understood too young

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joel
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I understood too young

Post by joel » October 23rd, 2006, 8:10 pm

I understood too young the truth of love
in all its endless promise. Would I’d not
committed my fidelity to you,
but rather lusted well-intentioned just
as you had lusted over love for me
and nothing more—but no, I promised love
and not orgasmic joy of new romance,
but solidarity for life’s perchance
occurrences. And now perchance to prove
my faithfulness despite what comes to be,
I learn you never loved me. Must
I honor my commitment? What is true
of love if love claims honor only wrought
by reciprocity?—not endless love.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by jimboloco » October 24th, 2006, 8:15 am

mercy
i'd be blue
and have compassion for she and you
and let her go
and get on with my aloneness
one more time
cause lust is not sublime
just a crusty jar of sugar
nothing more
instead
find what touches you
sweetly
deeply
sincerely
there's the keeper
a sweet friend.
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Axanderdeath
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Post by Axanderdeath » October 24th, 2006, 1:50 pm

two sit in a park
the clouds are dark
a moment
that should last for ever
but it starts to rain...
thus spoke G.A.P.

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