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without him

Post by Doreen Peri » December 2nd, 2004, 2:34 am

without him,
my life
would
be

just
survival.

no, only.
no, merely.

merely is
much stronger
than only
or just.
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Post by stilltrucking » December 2nd, 2004, 5:24 am

merely is stronger


I think that was beutiful
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Post by Doreen Peri » December 12th, 2004, 9:27 pm

thank you very much, Mr. Still :)
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Post by Redstormy » December 14th, 2004, 7:39 pm

Love Brevity of this write, sweet sentiment. :)

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