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e_dog
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momentary

Post by e_dog » December 2nd, 2006, 12:45 am

yes
i had my
chance
and yes
i
ruined it
i ruined
i
yes

you

know
that

yes
i had
a chance
a
and i
yes
a
yes

chance
and

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » December 11th, 2006, 5:30 am

love the 'and'

and I always overuse it.

and I'll keep on over usin' it.
Last edited by mnaz on December 11th, 2006, 2:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 11th, 2006, 9:59 am

chance moments
I always ruin them
too distracted
who has time for experience?

nice work e-dog

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