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Post by creativesoul » April 10th, 2007, 1:35 pm

open the valve
where abundance and peace flow in
like water cooling what is much too hot
those places inside that are like fire
bring with a passion that make cheeks flush
biology had played tricks on human beings set them up for yet another fall of mankind
to build him up
for another empire to blossom
defind by leisure and pleasure , economy.
hegemony like a petticoat
a puiritian vistorian lady
lifted and surprised by fridigid heterosexuality
langauage laced with invisability
traced like a sunset
on snow capped mountains
many years old
watching in silience
each season of creativity
playground games haunting the present
divison and teasing and happy laughter
little girls protecting what belongs to indirect communication
borderwork between the genders like a wrinkle on an old woman s face

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Post by joel » April 12th, 2007, 7:13 pm

this is powerful and thoughtful. i really go for its creativity and soul--the kind of words that if i overheard someone saying at a restaurant, i'd order numberless cups of coffee to stick around and quietly eavesdrop.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by creativesoul » April 16th, 2007, 3:14 pm

please do join us in any cafe anytime
always interested in new conversation

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