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Arcadia
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Post by Arcadia » April 22nd, 2007, 6:52 pm

hoy me quedé sin mirar
¿cuántos son?
¿cuántos somos?
¿quiénes son?

monstruosidad engolfada
(era todo tuyo)

unos buenos procesos...
¿qué procesos?
¡ejemplos!, ¡ejemplos!

accedemos
dejando escapar mariposas
entonces empezaron los desafíos

Unfolding

today I stayed without watching
how many are they?
how many are we?
who are they?

engulfed monstruosity
(it was all your own)

some good processes...
what process?
examples, examples!

we accede
leaving butterflies scape
then the challenges started

(unknown pop songs plus Manzoni plus Chodron collage)

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Post by joel » April 23rd, 2007, 9:16 am

a little confusing for me...but not uncomfortable. confusing without evacuations and NASA shootings and hit-and-runs and that little engagement in Iraq (and littler engagement in Afghanistan (are we still there?)) and drug deals and all--that kind of confusing I don't mind at all.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by stilltrucking » April 23rd, 2007, 10:26 am

I liked it a lot too
mazy and mysterious
as if the world was unfolding before my eyes

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Post by Arcadia » April 24th, 2007, 2:37 pm

thanks for reading!
It was a play.
confortable/unconfortable: these two words remaind me that we are in an elections year again...

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