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Comebacks

Post by hester_prynne » July 24th, 2007, 3:44 am

I must be
repositioning
my faithful
boomerang.

Osmosis stupor,
generous blur,
I am slumped in you!

I'm, barely afloat,
adrift in a leap,
no landing strip,
yet in sight.

I'm breathing
in gasps,
exhaling,
grand gusts.

Sure signs,
another comeback,
is spinning my way
again.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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Post by YABYUM » July 24th, 2007, 8:02 am

I'm, barely afloat,
adrift in a leap,
no landing strip,
yet in sight.



good stanza.
nice.
i mean ice.
http://frombeerstobabies.blogspot.com/
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Post by mnaz » July 29th, 2007, 4:20 am

"don't call it a comeback... I been here for years"...

heard some rapper say that one time, ages ago... LL Cool J, maybe...

Nothin' like that pure renewal and inspiration, tho... the driving force...

the reminder, the trigger...
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Post by WIREMAN » July 31st, 2007, 9:40 pm

you doobie flyin' thedagirl.............
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Totenkopf

Post by Totenkopf » September 28th, 2007, 6:19 pm

Osmosis stupor,
generous blur,
I am slumped in you!
Ah yeah that rocks.
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