Marching

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Lightning Rod
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Marching

Post by Lightning Rod » September 3rd, 2007, 2:43 am

I'm only a soldier
as long as I have rations, I march

not like a pedestrian, no
like a mercenary obsessed
waiting for salt and blood

I would kill the emperor if I could
if I could to save the blood of my brothers
husbands and wives and significant others

still I march, even without pay
the scars on my forearms are displayed
my badges of addiction and battle
I straddle the great divide with innocence
and dedication to causes I hardly understand

just a soldier waiting for orders
D Day is a Pall Mall
dying to cross the borders
invade the enemy lines
terror on foot, my mongol horde
rapture on horseback

I'm adored in my armor and uniform
who cares about the paycheck?
I'm just a soldier living to plunder
and loot the absolute
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by hester_prynne » September 4th, 2007, 3:37 am

Truth is beauty.
It's all over this poem.
I really like this LRod....

H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by e_dog » September 4th, 2007, 9:05 am

"I'm just a soldier living to plunder
and loot the absolute"
that's a great line. epitaph (or, T-shirt) worthy.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Re: Marching

Post by joel » September 4th, 2007, 9:14 am

my complete agreement with hester and e_dog. but make me a t-shirt with this one:
Lightning Rod wrote:I'm only a soldier
as long as I have rations, I march
there's no way i can not read after this line.

awesome.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by mnaz » September 7th, 2007, 3:35 pm

lots packed into this versatile, compact testimonial...

"...dedication to causes I hardly understand"...

Well.... yes.

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