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wannabeguru
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discover the earth and hands

Post by wannabeguru » September 20th, 2007, 8:36 pm

creativesoul wrote:ldiscovered who i was
and was not
I REALLY like this one still CS. i read it twice before. It is a bit more poetic than you usually allow; nonetheless it is a story too.
Good Show! Jolly well done!
Thanks.
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Post by Perdida » September 28th, 2007, 6:26 pm

i have seen the long necked women of thai land
the imagery and the flow in this line alone blows me away.
Thank you for that CS.

I want to see it all too, take me with you?

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