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Post by mtmynd » November 7th, 2007, 12:22 pm

passage


enjoy the moment where time
no longer exists

enjoy the moment where mind
is at ease

enjoy the moment where light
illuminates all doubt

enjoy the moment when love
pours like rain

enjoy the moment when light
passes flame to wick

we are all candles
in the void –

like stars in the universe
like drops within the ocean
giving what we are
in return for our
passage

_________

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Post by judih » November 7th, 2007, 1:52 pm

sublime meditative journey

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Post by hester_prynne » November 7th, 2007, 3:55 pm

Sublime indeed.....
Thank you dear Cec.....
I needed that more than you might know.....

H 8)
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Post by stilltrucking » November 7th, 2007, 4:05 pm

dittos

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Post by stilltrucking » November 8th, 2007, 4:48 am

I suppose I could have edited the above comment instead of going through another reply.

everything j and h said
I could not add to it cecil.
they said it all
for me

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Post by mtmynd » November 8th, 2007, 1:42 pm

Thx for the replies, J, H, and T! Glad you enjoyed the passage. :wink:

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Post by Arcadia » November 8th, 2007, 5:11 pm

thanks!! :D

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Post by mousey1 » November 9th, 2007, 7:30 pm

I like the thought that we are all candles.

I guess maybe we are. Helping each other to not blow out, adding some much needed glow.

Thanks for this poem
it glowed.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mtmynd » November 11th, 2007, 11:31 am

Thank you, Arcadia and mousey-one... happy to hear from you!

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Post by WIREMAN » November 11th, 2007, 8:46 pm

thanks for the words cecil
candles flickering that's
what we do be......

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Post by mtmynd » November 11th, 2007, 10:34 pm

yes, wired, that's what we do... flicker away each moment until our wax is gone... on our physical plane anyway. as you know there is so much more than that alone... infinitely more.

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Post by Perdida » November 16th, 2007, 6:17 pm

I love this, it kinda pulled my head in a little (not sure you know what i mean) i was wondering though if you'd allow me to print this out ? Something i can use to fall back on.

Thank you

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Post by mtmynd » November 16th, 2007, 7:42 pm

Very kind of you, Perdida. Feel free to print this out... please.

btw: "it kinda pulled my head in a little." hmmm... sorry, i don't really understand that, altho it does sound interesting! ;-)

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