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Post by Lightning Rod » November 14th, 2007, 10:06 pm

Major Surgery

anger is a hacksaw
it gnaws at your bones
it will grind you into little pieces
if you let it

anger is worse than cancer
and probably causes it
if we resent the air we breathe
it will poison us

of course you sit in shit
it goes with the territory called life
you can take it with a smile
or cope with endless strife

There is no pain like my pain
goes the simpering whisper
definition of major surgery:
when they are cutting on YOU
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by WIREMAN » November 14th, 2007, 10:19 pm

just stick me
with needles
visions of the
saw takin' my
leg endure, yet
after so much
angst and worry
you get to a
point of release
love is the worst
the only cure is
the greatest
adventure, call it
movin' on..........

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Post by Lightning Rod » November 14th, 2007, 10:31 pm

great response, mark

I know you understand the subject

the point of release is the healing point

jam on my friend
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 14th, 2007, 10:39 pm

yes... i agree.. thank you

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 14th, 2007, 10:45 pm

yeah and when it's caused by other people who don't give a shit about whether you're angry or not, it makes it even worse.

well said.

fuck.. i'm so pissed off I could scream!

Who has the advantage? The prosecutor or the criminal? You'd think it should be the prosecutor if there is a valid case and abundant evidence proves the criminal has stolen, taken advantage of, or otherwise raped a person's life.

Apparently it's OK if a person comes into your home and takes your money with the agreement that they will provide certain products and services and then never provides either.

It's OK. All the courts need is a smile and a promise.

I'm so pissed off right now I could scream.

How to make this humorous... hmmm... Nobody cares about serious shit. Nobody really wants to talk about all the shit that pisses you off. Why would they? Everybody has too many problems. Nobody wants to hear each other's problems. They just want to hear that everything is going to be OK.

Just like the fricking criminal. That's what he gets told. Everything will be OK. All that matters is that you "mean well."

There's got to be something funny about this.

Hmm.... OK. Here's something. You'll get a kick out of this.

I just paid $6 a piece for 2 packs of cigarettes and they only cost $2.85 a pack. Go figure. Somebody's laughing all the way to the bank.

No wait.. that wasn't funny. But it was true.

_________

$4000, 6 months of the imminent possibility of electricution while using the garbage disposal and he gets a slap on the wrist and walks like nuthin ever happened?

As IF my life wasn't put on hold. As if I wasn't violated. I feel raped. Truly.

Guess it's best not to be angry and just let the world fuck with you all it wants and lay down on the pavement and take it, huh?

Anger is important. It has a GOOD place and a purposeful place as long as it isn't overused.

Time to put my BITCH hat on. I mean business. If you see him on the street, tell him I said, "Don't fuck with me. You're fuckin with the wrong lady."

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Post by hester_prynne » November 15th, 2007, 3:25 am

Wear the bitch hat proudly.
You've been robbed, grand theft style, not to mention the danger his half assed work left you in and the anxiety that comes from that.
I'd say you were inhuman if you didn't feel angry, and violated.
Get it out.
There must be something you can do.
Some other place that can help you with this.
Take it to your State Attorney General, file a complaint there.
I did that once in Oregon and they helped me alot.
Is the ruling final?
I can't believe it if it is.
I'm not giving up on this, what can I do to help?
You don't deserve this, you deserve so much better because you are so much better than this fucking good old boy system of male entitlement which is really just a dumbing down of the male species.
I mean, that amount of money just goes down the drain he fucked up?
I just can't believe it!!!!! It's completely frightening!
It's a huge amount of money!
Christ Almighty, what is to become of us?
Keep fighting!!!!!

H 8)
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Post by stilltrucking » November 15th, 2007, 5:18 am

I am not right Clay
I got a brain that borders on autistic
Poetry knocks me for a loop

I like piece a lot clay
a really really lot


now an autistic ramble if you don't mind please

Clay said:
of course you sit in shit
it goes with the territory called life
St. Augustine says, “We are born between feces and urine.”
I think about the relative size of the sperm and the egg, Women are from Jupiter, men are from Sheboygan.

Quote:
. Thus Joyce’s sensual Great Mother, Molly Bloom, sleepily mulls over all men in her life as “he,” implying their casual interchangeability.
mangled cut and paste
she wears an Egytian ring that sparkles before she speaks
you go to leave her laughing when you go

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Post by Arcadia » November 15th, 2007, 2:16 pm

anger is imperative
it reclaims space
and basically we are not educated to feel anger
but to feel guilt instead
(invite anger to walk)

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Post by e_dog » November 18th, 2007, 10:16 pm

Major Surgery, this
is Doctor General. Pleased
to meat you.

Chain saw
is what you
need
to cut the fetters binding
you to Plato's all
-e gory.

Chain saw
rock
strike scissors
into papers.

To smoke.

The smoke.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by jimboloco » November 19th, 2007, 2:48 pm

i lived thru a livid anger
it almost killed me
wore me down to a trembling morass

forgiveness is never complete

survival helps
and insight

puffy white clouds
deep blue sky
hot coffee!
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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