not torture

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e_dog
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not torture

Post by e_dog » November 22nd, 2007, 4:15 am

i'm addicted to the sadness
you left me
with.

leaning over
the edge,
filling the abyss
with tears.

i plunge
my
face in
to drown
but cough on
memories
of laughter.

and have to
come up
for air.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Maggie
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Post by Maggie » November 24th, 2007, 11:27 am

I have read a couple of your other pieces as well as this one . You do quite well with this form . I enjoyed this a great deal .
I'll hold on to this gift we share
it is as slippery as it is rare
I'll hold on to that feeling
of waking and finding you there
I'll hold on to you and you hold on to me

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Post by e_dog » November 26th, 2007, 1:14 am

thanks for reading.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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