If we lost the war

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mnaz
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If we lost the war

Post by mnaz » November 14th, 2007, 5:45 am

Reality is a volcano on the verge, like Saint Helens.
Madness ruins beauty and beauty flows quietly from madness,
polyrhythmic and poly-modal in poly-orbit, and circles in poly-circles,
and the great species are algae blooms glued to an ageless rock arc,
rock art of kingdoms like a half tick, full of erosion and gain and truth,
like an earthquake out in crushing absolute zero with the stars out.
If we don't win this war I'll be forced to speak Russian.
So then how do you say "kiss my ass" in Russian?
If we win I'll be forced to speak absolute zero,
with the stars out.
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Post by Arcadia » November 14th, 2007, 1:31 pm

absolute zero and russian!!...they look as complicated first sight options... I can´t help you with russian...(pravda and niet are the only words I know...!)
interesting writing!! :)

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Post by mnaz » November 14th, 2007, 1:51 pm

wow... interesting possibilities here...
yeah.... I was reeaally tired last night.

Thanks Arcadia.

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Post by e_dog » November 21st, 2007, 10:42 pm

excelent pome.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by mnaz » November 24th, 2007, 5:13 pm

Thanks. I was thinking of a hypothetical earthquake somewhere in the starlit mountains of Pluto (would it make a sound?), and somehow this came out...

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Post by jimboloco » November 25th, 2007, 5:59 pm

breathtaking
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by e_dog » November 26th, 2007, 5:44 pm

if a regime falls in burma does it make a sound in america?

if a man is tortured in cia blacksites in europa, afrika, anywhere, do we even kno?
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by hester_prynne » November 26th, 2007, 9:07 pm

Gott damned fantastic read mnaz.
Yeah.

H 8)
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