paganini sunrise

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perezoso

paganini sunrise

Post by perezoso » December 20th, 2004, 2:48 pm

the shredded light
osiris phased over
the pod:
polymodal fractals
32 notes of
chrome
vermillion:
the virtuoso
diabolical
as a page of integrals........
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Post by stilltrucking » December 20th, 2004, 2:51 pm

all I can say is
bravo
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perezoso

Post by perezoso » December 20th, 2004, 2:55 pm

imagine nicholas paganini
up mother's spinkta

paganini analogged
ripping any would
be shelleys into filigree
obsolescence

the virtuoso is the
supreme bard

caprice
perlman
or malmsteen
eviscerating
each peasant hymn
into grunts

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Post by stilltrucking » December 20th, 2004, 9:32 pm

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perezoso

Post by perezoso » December 20th, 2004, 11:05 pm

I would think you a genuis
Really? cool. Unfortunately, ST the Deep-thinker, it's unlikely I will conceive of you in those terms. Have another cup-a-joe and old-fashioned on me, pops.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 20th, 2004, 11:10 pm

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perezoso

Post by perezoso » December 20th, 2004, 11:29 pm

"After Auschwitz, poetry is impossible." Adorno

"Broken Hearts are for Assholes." F. Zappa

Your instructions: google some Paganini, listen to Perlman's version of 1st Caprice, then take a copy of say Coleridge or Ginsburg or Polocknieck's Fight Club and jam it down yr garbage disposal: watch yr grubbies, pops

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