another thing

[diesel dyke]

inside the skin
where suffering meets desire
women can't get zen


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[westcoast]

if you need to "get it"
you aint' got "it"
forget it




PS - you look awfully..um...hairy...for a dyke.

[stilltrucking]

sharp in take of breath when I wrote it I thought wow I just wrote a haiku maybe

now i have my doubts for one thing the first line is only four sylables And I question other things about it too

. The hypertext link for get that was an afterthough not a part of the spontaniety something I did in an edit after I posted. Something I remembered from a Women's Zen center

the same with meet/meat maybe me pandering to women again.

Not sure about the verbs either suffering
But just came out in flash it was fun
I though by golly I may have finally written a ku,
or was it something for the inside of a fortune cookie.

thanks for taking the time to reply
sincerely
jt

[stilltrucking]

now that i think about it was the women's zen center article about women not getting enlightenment that inspired the ku

and the title another thing of course was inspired by you

as always
thank you for you inspiration
perspiration and willful art

RE

PS - you look awfully..um...hairy...for a dyke.

this avatar is what I look like when I shave
I grew the beard to get the boys leave me alone.

[westcoast]

it's all YOU?
wrapped around
a kuku -
whooo,
who knew!!
____________

LOL...omg, it's another manifestation of you. We really can't believe our eyes, ears or beards!

~westcoast

[westcoast]

another
nothing
thing..

haiku really doesn't have to conform to anything. that's all bull kuku. if you read up on the topic in english translations of japanese text you'll learn that anything goes... wheeee!!

.

[stilltrucking]

that's why women can't get enlightened.