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westcoast
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Post by westcoast » March 30th, 2008, 7:30 pm

i go into the dark water
for eternal baptism
holding hands with
Virginia Woolf
she/ we sink
to our knees
reverent
synchronized swimmers
the quickening current under our breasts
arms outstretch
and let ourselves
down/ under/ deeper


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Post by Doreen Peri » March 30th, 2008, 7:56 pm

nice!

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Post by westcoast » March 30th, 2008, 8:00 pm

thanks sweetie! i'm trying to reach deeper.

~westie

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 30th, 2008, 8:05 pm

hey, you are so prolific, i can't keep up reading all you post!.. .and as for deep? i you reach any deeper, you'll pull my heartstrings out through my lungs and i won't be able to breathe ok? so geez... give a girl a break, wouldja?

heh :D ;)

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 30th, 2008, 8:06 pm

all that was to say .... we are truly honored to have you here.

i hope you know that.

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Post by westcoast » March 30th, 2008, 8:10 pm

i do. thank U!

:)

~westie

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