Cat's Eye

Clarity.
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WIREMAN
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Cat's Eye

Post by WIREMAN » July 16th, 2007, 6:24 pm

Cat's Eye
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heat of broken will
time laid bare by the bay
ripples of blue light
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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haunting...

Post by Rose » July 17th, 2007, 9:32 am

I enjoyed your haiku very much with its intense emotions and a lightness of being reflected through the mirrored house of time.

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Post by WIREMAN » July 17th, 2007, 7:52 pm

an evening in Baltimore hangin' with a rock-a-billy band....thanks Rose & welcome to S8..........wired
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Post by the flaming ace » April 8th, 2008, 11:40 am

4 cats in a tinderbox!
the queen is the smallest
big boy is the lost kitty!
[b][color=darkgreen]one more for th road[/color][/b] :mrgreen:
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