Change Floods

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mtmynd
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Change Floods

Post by mtmynd » April 16th, 2008, 12:08 pm

change floods

getting her to change
was like
bending rain with a spoon

but finally her
thoughts flooded
the dry fields
of parched ideas
bringing her creations
into full bloom

the freshness sublime
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Post by hester_prynne » April 16th, 2008, 8:22 pm

I just love this, it's a rush!

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Post by mnaz » April 16th, 2008, 11:50 pm

It seems..
she changes us instead..
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