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Fostoria fields

Post by jweeble » April 23rd, 2008, 2:10 pm

Fields of crystal
skeletal limbs stretch
touching icy winter sun
crystalline wrappings

haiku first - but also...

among fields of crystal
the skeletal limbs stretch
desperately imploring
the icy winter sun
to dabble her golden-tinged fingers
through their
crystalline-wrapped hair
to release, relax
even as it takes away
their shine.
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Post by mnaz » April 23rd, 2008, 5:09 pm

i can't help but notice,
but life seems desperate.
and this was always how it should be.
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Post by WIREMAN » April 23rd, 2008, 7:08 pm

yes sizzlin' on the fringe............
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Post by westcoast » April 26th, 2008, 1:29 am

a gorgeous visual :) nice work, jw.

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Post by hester_prynne » April 26th, 2008, 8:49 pm

Totally dig this!!!!!!!!!!!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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Post by mtmynd » April 27th, 2008, 12:07 am

i concur with the prior 6 repliers.

nicely said.
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